20070729 : Rewritten. Previous page here.

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Man, after the pain in the ass that was the last page, it feels good to get a page cranked out in two nights instead of three. Might as well be one night- all that gone done on Monday was basic frameing and creating the file.

Bit of a switchup, too- I was happier with West than I was with anything else on the last page.... this time it's the reverse. Learned a couple more tricks about backgrounds- I'll probably be using the silhouette technique quite a bit more, at least where appropriate.

.... and I just spotted the typo. I'll get it fixed in the evening- the comms bubbles are a pain to correct. Also, Raven shouldn't be purple. She isn't. She wasn't. She never was. But somehow she turned out that way somewhere between the b and f progressionals. I'll fix that too. And then I'll update this some more about the exciting things I'll be doing this week that you will, if everything goes smoothly, be seeing a hint of on Saturday.

===[ a few hours later... ]===

Okay, that's fixed. Silly me- there wasn't a proper type layer for this page, so I had to do some rubber-stamping to clean out the affected word balloon. Oops. Also made some minor adjustments to the second West panel- mostly contrast and shading stuff, with some minor color corrections. One of those things that would have been fixed out of the gate if I'd had more time last night, or if I'd held off on the finish until today.