20070727 : Overhauled. Extensively.

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Yay! 'n shizzle. I can't say I'm terribly happy with this page- in fact, I won't. I'm not. It could, however, be orders of magnitude worse, and to make it orders of magnitude better would involve spending more time on it than is effectively useful. Nevermind the fact that I really screwed up the lighting on the Sabrosa's engines. :| I want chapter two done, dammit- and at this point, only eight pages remain! :)

Oh, and c2 now has more pages than c1. It's also taken three times as long to produce. :P

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I fixed the lighting, to a point- being a dipass, I merged the file before I saved it, so the last panel is one big wad O goop. Fortunately, the rubber stamp SAVED TEH DAY and the only thing I'm really out- aside from a WHOLE FIVE MINUTES- is the time it's going to take to sync the hardcopy again. Woot.