Mastering, 20070721 : Page has been properly sized. Dialogue rewritten and properly scaled. This is the first of the pages in Chapters One and Two to be Adjusted in such a fashion - the rest of them will follow in short order.

While I'm at it I'm dropping the little "e" things from the page titles.

Also, changed RLF (which means "Rhikommi Light Freighter") to ICS (Independant Cargo Ship).

20070725 : Upgraded the Daedalus renders.

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Edited 20050430 : I AM THE EVIL MIDNIGHT TURD POLISHER WHAT POLISHES AT MIDNIGHT. I'M BAD BABY, BAD! BAD IS GOOD, BABY! DOWN WITH GOVERNMENT!

*pant* *wheeze*

Killed Greg's internal monologue, which was superimposed behind his actual dialogue. I can't read it, and if I can't, you probably can't. It doesn't even show up in the webscale version. After that was axed, I fixed some convergence issues with the dialogue, expanded Shannon's first line into something a little more natural, fixed font sizing on the narration and tweaked the lightingon the characters just a bit.

All in a days work.

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And the Daedalus finally debuts. Many thanks to Chris Bodine for modelling the vessel, doing the initial renders, and refreshing my memory as to how the process works so I could render out the second shot of the vehicle- I was originally intending to use a different angle, but the composition makes much more sense this way. :-)

Bodine++

That aside, I'm still working on style revisions- backgrounds aren't as painful as I thought they would be at this level of low detail, and I've started making more effort in the finishing department with contrast adjustments.

< solios> fagbot: doot for THE DAEDALUS
< fagbot> We're talking the discreet cloning of European prostitutes on a massive, MASSIVE scale.


22:53 <@xeno> !
22:53 <@xeno> it doesn't look like a volvo anymore :(